My fists clench as the anger flows through me
Knees tremble, my bottom lip is bitten
Looking for someone to take it out on
A sharp throbbing pain courses through my head
Hoping I can gain self control
Before I damage a nearby object
But the rage doen't stop
The mirror smashes, my fist impales the wall
I take a deep breath
To regain my reasoning
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If you really don't like it though, a suggestion:
Hoping I can gain self control
Before I damage a nearby object
The wording there seems a bit awkward to me. The "nearby object" bit seems a bit too specific.
Loved the rest of it!
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"I am good, but not an angel. I do sin, but I am not the devil. I am pretty, but not beautiful. I have friends, but I am not the Peacemaker. I'm just a small girl in a big world trying to find someone to love." –Marilyn Monroe
Knees tremble, my bottom lip is bitten
Looking for someone to take it out on"
You description techniques and sense of imagery are superb
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"I am good, but not an angel. I do sin, but I am not the devil. I am pretty, but not beautiful. I have friends, but I am not the Peacemaker. I'm just a small girl in a big world trying to find someone to love." –Marilyn Monroe
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5 out of 4 people have trouble with fractions ^-^~-~`
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"I am good, but not an angel. I do sin, but I am not the devil. I am pretty, but not beautiful. I have friends, but I am not the Peacemaker. I'm just a small girl in a big world trying to find someone to love." –Marilyn Monroe
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5 out of 4 people have trouble with fractions ^-^~-~`
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